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The chart below show the average seasonal temperature and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and summer town

The chart below show the average seasonal temperature and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and summer town B7VVm
The bar chart illustrates the information about the average seasonal temperatures and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and summer town. It is clearly seen from the graph average temperature of winter in summer town was around 19 Celsius. It was increase in spring and summer was approx 30 and 34 Celsius in summer town than it was again decrease in autumn about 29 Celsius in summer town. Average temperature of winter was very low in Springfield was near to 5 unit. In spring season unit was minor rise around 12. Than it was highly grow in summer and autumn in Springfield. The rainfall was same in winter and spring was about 18 or 19 mm in summer town. Than it was at the pic (140mm) in summer season in summer town. Than it again decreased in autumn in summer town. The rainfall was same in all season winter, spring, summer and autumn in Springfield was near by 41, 40, 42 and 50. Overall, the same average of temperature and rainfall was same in the season of summer in the summer town.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the
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for the cities of Springfield and
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was around 19 Celsius. It was increase in spring and
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was approx 30 and 34 Celsius in
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low in Springfield was near to 5 unit. In spring
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unit was minor rise around 12.
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and autumn in Springfield.

The
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and spring was about 18 or 19 mm in
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and autumn in Springfield was
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41, 40, 42 and 50.

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IELTS academic The chart below show the average seasonal temperature and rainfall for the cities of Springfield and summer town

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