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My time, our future, my present

My time, our future, my present O6KBE
My life right now is kinda a wreck. Its not to good in school but i can usaly do my work but its sometimes really hard and challenging other times i can do it with some level om difficulty. And i also have to studie for my moped lisence and im also have to bring my grades upp to be able to get into the schools that i want to get into. Even with all the stress i still have a little time for my hobbies one is listining to music but I can do that while i studie but I can't play video games while I studie but I sometimes have a little time to do so. I also play table tennis or ping pong or whatever you want to call it. I play table tennis on monday and wendsdays but im also sometimes in extra traning or toruniments but they are usally during the weekends for a hour or three sometiems two.
My life right
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now
is kinda a wreck.
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Its
not to
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good
in school
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but
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i
can
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usaly
do my work
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but
its
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sometimes
really
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hard
and challenging other times
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i
can do it with
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some
level
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om
difficulty.

And
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i
also
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have to
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studie
for my moped
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lisence
and
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im
also
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have to
bring my
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grades upp
to be able to
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get
into the schools that
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i
want to
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get
into. Even with all the
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stress
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i
still
have a
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little
time for my hobbies one is
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listining
to music
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but
I can do that while i
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studie
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but
I can't play video games while I
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studie
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but
I
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sometimes
have a
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little
time to do
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so
. I
also
play table tennis or ping pong or whatever you want to call it. I play table tennis on
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monday
and
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wendsdays
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but
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im
also
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sometimes
in extra
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traning
or toruniments
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but
they are
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usally
during the weekends for
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a
hour or three
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sometiems
two.
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IELTS academic My time, our future, my present

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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