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pie chart expenditure on household items of japan and malaysia

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The pie chart illustrate the average money spent on household in Japan and Malaysia for the year 2010. Overall, it can be seen that both the countries spent least on the health care sector. japan spent the most on other goods and services and in Malaysia the highest expenditure was in the sector on housing. the Japanese have spent 29% on the other good and services which is slightly more than what Malaysia spent, which is 26%. japan has also spent more on that Malaysia in the sector of transport, which is double than that of Malaysia. So is the case with healthcare, where japan has spent 6% and Malaysia has spent the half of it. In case of housing, Malaysia exceeds the expenditure by 13% than Japan and for food Malaysia spent 27 % which is slightly more than what japan has spent.
The pie chart illustrate the average money
spent
on household in
Japan
and Malaysia for the year 2010.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that both the countries
spent
least on the health care sector.
japan
spent
the most on other
goods
and services and in Malaysia the highest expenditure was in the sector on housing.

the
Japanese have
spent
29% on the other
good
and services which is
slightly
more than what Malaysia
spent
, which is 26%.
japan
has
also
spent
more on that Malaysia in the sector of transport, which is double than that of Malaysia.
So
is the case with healthcare, where
japan
has
spent
6% and Malaysia has
spent
the half of it.

In case of housing, Malaysia exceeds the expenditure by 13% than
Japan
and for food Malaysia
spent
27 % which is
slightly
more than what
japan
has
spent
.
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