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The given graphs describe the UK industry steel in terms of employment status and value changes over 30 decades, starting from 1970.

The given graphs describe the UK industry steel in terms of employment status and value changes over 30 decades, starting from 1970. YRpoN
The given graphs describe the UK industry steel in terms of employment status and value changes over 30 decades, starting from 1970. It is clear that from 1970 to 2000, in the total UK demand and production steel decreased, while the import of steel increased. In addition, the number of workers in steel industry declined rapidly. As can be seen from the chart, standing at 50 thousand people working in 1970, the number of employees in the UK industry steel fell considerably by 30 thousand people in 1990. The figure still decreased slightly to about 17 thousand workers in 2000 Looking at the chart in more detail, there was 200000 tones in the total UK demand for steel in 1970, after which the figure in 1990 declined quickly to around 100000 tones and then this number maintained to 2000. Similarly, the UK production of steel stood at roughly 170000 tones, after there was a rocket drop by about 100000 tones in 1990. The figure witnessed a remain approximately 100000 in 2000. In contrast, the amount of steel impored in the UK was very litte in 1970, after which a rise of 70000 tones was recorded in the period from 1980 to 2000.
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graphs
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describe
the UK industry
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steel
in terms of employment status and value
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changes
over 30 decades, starting from 1970.

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clear
that from 1970 to 2000, in the total UK demand and production
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steel
decreased, while the import of
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steel
increased.
In addition
, the number of workers in
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steel
industry declined
rapidly
.

As can be
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seen
from the chart, standing at 50 thousand
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people
working in 1970, the number of employees in the UK industry
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steel
fell
considerably
by 30 thousand
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people
in 1990. The figure
still
decreased
slightly
to about 17 thousand workers in 2000

Looking at the chart in more detail, there was 200000
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tones
in the total UK demand for
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steel
in 1970, after which the figure in 1990 declined
quickly
to around 100000
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tones
and then this number maintained to 2000.
Similarly
, the UK production of
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steel
stood at roughly 170000
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tones
, after there was a rocket drop by about 100000
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tones
in 1990. The figure witnessed
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a remain
approximately 100000 in 2000.
In contrast
, the amount of
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steel
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impored
in the UK was
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litte
in 1970, after which a rise of 70000
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tones
was recorded
in the period from 1980 to 2000.
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IELTS academic The given graphs describe the UK industry steel in terms of employment status and value changes over 30 decades, starting from 1970.

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