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The provided horizontal bar graph and pie chart illustrates the reasons for travel and the prime causes for migrating through public transport in the US in 2009. Overall, it is enough to make it clear that the residents usually travel for their work whereas, the major problem they suffer through public transport is price of travel. In the bar graph, it is clearly seen that almost half of commuters generally leave their homes for work. Moreover, 19% of the total population have their personal excuses for travelling and only 16% people prefer shopping. One in ten person visits the social or recreation places by public vehicles whereas 6% people visit their friends or relatives. The pie chart reveals that 36% of dwellers face a problem of costing while transit through civil transport however one less than a fifth folks are worried about their safety measures. The aggressive drivers and highway congestion almost same just with the difference of 3% are not wiling to travel in mass transit. 8% of inhabitant could not reach the public transport. Furthermore, 6% use pedestrians instead of rapid transit.

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