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proportion of household income

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The assigned table charts illustrates information about the percentage of household income expenditure for food and drink, housing, clothing, entertainment in five countries. At the fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that TURKEY and SPAIN highest amount for food and drink than remaining three countries. Whereas FRANCE, GERMANY, UK spending 25%, 22%, 27%, respectively. While the FRANCE, GERMANY, UK spending more on housing and TURKEY, SPAIN is spending which is 20%, 18% less than remaining. In other hand, all countries spending less for clothing as well as entertainment moreover FRANCE and SPAIN spending less than 10% for clothing. While the other three countries spend the same around the 12%. for clothing. GERMANY and Spain is spending more on entertainment than others. Overall, it is lucid that TURKEY AND SPAIN maximum of expenditure on food and drink and FRANCE, GERMANY, UK is on Housing.

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, it is lucid that TURKEY AND SPAIN maximum of expenditure on food and drink and FRANCE, GERMANY, UK is on Housing. 