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The charts below show information about the number of fish and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven.

The charts below show information about the number of fish and the number of fishing boats used in Westhaven. Ll5Kp
The first chart shows how many swordgish and tuna were caught near Westhaven between 2008 and 2011. The second chart shows how many fishing boats there were in Westhaven during the same period. Overall, the number of fishing boats that were used did not affect the number of tuna which were caught. However, it did appear to affect the number of swordfish. When there were more boats, more swordfish were caught. In2008, more tuna was caught than swordfish with considerably more than 80. 000 and well over 70. 000 respectively. The next year there was an upward trend for both of them but the number of caught swordfish was more than tunes. On the other hand, thenumber of swordfish fell to about 80 000 in 2010, then increased again to reach about 110 thousands in 2011 while the number of tunas rose each year till it reached around 120 thousands. During the same period, there were 60 fishing boats in 2008. The total number rose to slightly over 60 and dropped to well over 50 in 2010. However, in 2011, there were totally 80 fishing boats.
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between 2008 and 2011. The second chart
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during the same period.

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of
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that were
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which
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, it did appear to affect the
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of swordfish. When there were more
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, more swordfish
were caught
.

In2008, more
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was caught
than swordfish with
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more than 80. 000 and well over 70. 000
respectively
. The
next
year there was an upward trend for both of them
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of caught swordfish was more than tunes.
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of swordfish fell to about 80 000 in 2010, then increased again to reach about 110 thousands in 2011 while the
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of tunas rose each year till it reached around 120 thousands.

During the same period, there were 60
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in 2008. The total
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rose to
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, in 2011, there were
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80
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