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The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of England.

The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of England. Aplxl

The given bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London in the two years, 1995 and 2013 and then compare different areas of England in terms of average house expenses. Overall, it is evident that in the first graph, the average house prices in England and London underwent upward trends. Another noteworthy observation is that throughout the surveyed period, an average house in London cost the most, while people living in the North East were reported to allocate the least amount of money for accommodation. The average houses expenses in England and London enjoyed a growth. Up from some 130. 000 pounds to 200. 000 pounds over the past 18 years, the former climbed twofold, to roughly 400. 000 pounds in 2013. Regarding the average houses prices in distinct areas in England in 2013. Houses in London were recorded to be at the top of the list, standing at 400. 000 pounds. The data for South East, South West, and North West areas were in the mid-range, at approximately 300. 000 pounds, 270. 000 pounds, and 200. 000 pounds respectively. In contrast, housing prices were more affordable for citizens living in Midlands and North East, at around 100. 000 pounds.

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