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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The given pictures illustrate the transformation of an island with the construction of some tourist facilities. As can be seen from the picture, it is clearly evident that the island had greatly changes for tourism purpose. Overall, the new construction has allowed visitor to access the island by sea and provide them with accommodation. When the island was developed for tourism, the houses which are connected by footpath now occupy the majority of its area. At the middle of the lodging area, there is a reception, to the north of it a restaurant has been built. On the south of the island, a pier has been constructed, which allows boats to dock. On the west of the island, the beach has now turned into the swimming area where guess can access by using the footpath
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island
with the construction of
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some
tourist facilities.

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seen
from the picture, it is
clearly
evident that the
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island
had
greatly
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changes
for tourism purpose.
Overall
, the new construction has
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allowed
visitor to access the
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island
by sea and provide them with accommodation.

When the
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island
was developed
for tourism, the
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houses
which
are connected
by footpath
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now
occupy the majority of its area. At the middle of the lodging area, there is a reception, to the north of it a restaurant has
been built
.

On the south of the
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island
, a pier has
been constructed
, which
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allows
boats to dock. On the west of the
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island
, the beach has
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now
turned into the swimming area where guess can access by using the footpath

IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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