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The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The given pictures illustrate the recent transformation which have taken place in Kimsville town between the year of 2002 and today. Looking at the maps, it is immediately obvious that the town has undergone a number of significant changes. Overall, the introduction of new buildings and transport facilities have been accompanied by the repurposing of a building in the town. As regards the diagrams, in the year 2002, the town was surrounded by numerous trees. Today, the trees on both the North West and the South West of Kimsville have been cut down to erect new apartments and football station. On the right side of city center, the factory has been knocked off to make way for Software Company. Moreover, a new train station has been constructed to the West of the city Centre, which facilitated visitors or traveler to come here more. Interestingly, the building which used to be an old cinema in 2002, now it has been converted into a bar to cater to the people’s entertainment in the town. However, the Shopping Centre in the North of the town has remained the same with no change.
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pictures illustrate the recent transformation which have taken place in Kimsville
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town
between the year of 2002 and
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today
.

Looking at the maps, it is immediately obvious that the
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town
has undergone a number of significant
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changes
.
Overall
, the introduction of new buildings and transport facilities have
been accompanied
by the repurposing of a building in the town.

As regards the diagrams, in the year 2002, the
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town
was surrounded
by numerous trees.
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Today
, the trees on both the North West and the South West of Kimsville have been
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cut
down to erect new apartments and football station. On the right side of city center, the factory has
been knocked
off to
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make
way for Software
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Company
.

Moreover
, a new train station has
been constructed
to the West of the city Centre, which facilitated visitors or traveler to
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come
here more.
Interestingly
, the building which
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used
to be an
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old
cinema in 2002,
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now
it has
been converted
into a bar to cater to the
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people
’s entertainment in the
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town
.
However
, the Shopping Centre in the North of the
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town
has remained the same with no
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change
.

IELTS academic The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

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