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The chart below provides information about bullying and types of bullying (physical vs online) by age that people experienced.

The chart below provides information about bullying and types of bullying (physical vs online) by age that people experienced. xX79
The bar chat illustrates the information about bullying and types of bullying like physical versus online by different age group that people experienced. overall, the least percentage of both categories were in 15 age group In details, both categories have above 30% in 14 age group. Then the amount fell down to 10% in both categories in 15 age. After that, the percentage of physical bullying is 55% than the percentage of cyber bullying is 20% in 16 age group. Likewise, in 17 age group the percentage of live bullying is 40% and the percentage of online is to nearly 30%. Similarly, the ratio of physical bullying in 18 age group is 30% whereas the ratio of online bullying is near about 10%. After-all, in 19+ age group the physical bullying is about to 32% approximately where the ratio of online bullying is just above 15% as compare to physical bullying, the cyber bullying is less.
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overall
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of both categories were in 15
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, both categories have above 30% in 14
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age
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. Then the amount fell down to 10% in both categories in 15
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age
. After that, the
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percentage
of
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physical
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bullying
is 55% than the
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percentage
of cyber
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is 20% in 16
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age
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.
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, in 17
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in 18
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age
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group
is 30% whereas the ratio of
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online
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bullying
is near about 10%. After-all, in 19+
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age
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the
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physical
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is about to 32% approximately where the ratio of
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is
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, the cyber
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is less.
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IELTS academic The chart below provides information about bullying and types of bullying (physical vs online) by age that people experienced.

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