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The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree and those with other qualifiacations. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree and those with other qualifiacations. gjeO

The graph illustrates the weekly salary of graduated students in three degrees, namely those with a degree, those with a higher degree, and those with other qualifications divided into different age groups in 2002. It is cleared that people with first degrees earned less than those with university or higher degrees. Overall, the general trend for all three types of graduates is an upward trend from the 20s to middle age and a fluctuation after that time. In the early 20s, the weekly salary of first-degree holders stood at just about 350 while higher degree's and other's were 390 and 415 respectively. However, first-degree graduates continued to earn more money steadily, especially from 38 to 43 when they had the highest amount of wages which were close to 700. Later, their weekly salary dropped slightly between the 45s and then rose to around 790 before retirement. Despite all of these changes, people with first degree received the lowest money throughout 40 years. Dramatic increases in both higher degree and other qualification holders' weekly earnings were seen from their 20s to middle ages before different fluctuations. To specify, postgraduates' salary rocketed to the peak of over 800 when they were around 38, then fell sharply to less than 700 at the end of the period. Meanwhile, those with other qualifications got the same upward trend and reached 745 during 43s but only experienced slightly fluctuation before climbed noticeably and ended with the highest salary of 790.

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