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The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. QjNw
The given bar chart depicts the information about the number of private vehicle ownership in China over a 13 years time period. Overall, it can be seen that the trend shows the increase in vehicles owned by people all over the period. It is vivid that in 1987 around 45 thousand people owned the transportation, which increased after four years to about 1 lac people. In 1995 it had significantly increased, which was nearly 2 lac people owned the vehicle. In the next year it was increased by a1 lac people and after four years it had suddenly increased, which was more than 400 thousand people who owned the vehicle.
The
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bar chart depicts the information about the number of private
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vehicle
ownership in China over a 13 years time period.

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, it can be
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seen
that the trend
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shows
the increase in
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vehicles
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owned
by
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people
all over the period.

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people
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owned
the transportation, which
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increased
after four years to about 1 lac
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people
. In
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1995 it
had
significantly
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increased
, which was
nearly
2 lac
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people
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owned
the
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vehicle
. In the
next
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year
it was
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increased
by a1 lac
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people
and after four years it had
suddenly
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increased
, which was more than 400 thousand
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people
who
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owned
the
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vehicle
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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