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The diagram details the process of making leather products.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. ewQbK

The flowchart illustrates the procedure of manufacturing leather commodities. Overall, it can be seen that eight steps are implemented in the process of producing leather goods commencing with drying animals' skin and ending with making products in the factories. According to the diagram with more details, to begin with, the skins of animals are dried in an open environment. Then, these skins are conveyed to the factories with the help of trucks followed by washing them in a container including water and lime substances. Subsequently, after soaking them with lime, the flattening process on them is executed by a machine that had been constructed with two various wheels above each other. Following this, Tannin consist of water and vegetable matter is used for soaking the flattened skins in order to polish them and manufacture leather. Finally, these materials are transferred into another factory to make different kinds of commodities like shoes, bags, and balls

The flowchart illustrates the procedure of manufacturing leather commodities.

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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that eight steps are implemented
 in the process of producing leather This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 commencing with drying animals' You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
 and ending with making products in the factories.

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details
, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skins
 of animals are dried
 in an open environment. Then, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skins
are conveyed
 to the factories with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of trucks followed by washing them in a container including water and lime substances. Subsequently
, after soaking them with lime, the flattening process on them is executed
 by a machine that had been constructed
 with two various wheels above each other.

Following this, Tannin consist of water and vegetable matter is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for soaking the flattened You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skins
 in order to polish them and manufacture leather. Finally
, these materials are transferred
 into another factory to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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different
 kinds of commodities like shoes, bags, and balls