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The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chat inedicates the percentage of younge aged people in the UK that have their own houses or rent them 2004 to 2014. According to the chart in 2004 the home owners in the UK have the largest percentage of approximately 60%, despite only 20% of people rented a house in that year. from 2004 to 2010 the homeowners outnumbered the renters, whereas 2011 and 2012 the two group are equally at the same percent. in 2013 and 2014 young aged people renting houses out numbered. In 2014 the percentage of home owners are 36% that is the lowest amount since 2004, though people renting a house have reached to 47%. overall, the percentage of people aged 25-35 that have their own homes have decreased substaintialy, but renters percentage increased significantly.
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or rent them 2004 to 2014. According to the chart in 2004 the
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in the UK have the largest
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of approximately 60%, despite
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20% of
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rented a
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in that year.
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2004 to 2010 the homeowners outnumbered the renters, whereas 2011 and 2012 the two group are
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2013 and 2014 young aged
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renting
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out numbered. In 2014 the
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home owners
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renting a
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have reached to 47%.
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overall
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homes have decreased
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK.

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