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The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005 compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

This graph presents the proportion of overall unemployment in five European countries in 2015 and that of unemployment young people. As for the unemployment rate of young people, Poland had the highest figure in the five countries (more than 35%), followed by Italy (30%). In Hungary and Germany, 25% and 20% of young people had no jobs. This figure was the lowest in Denmark, at 15%. According to the chart, the percentage of unemployed people in Poland was still the highest, at around 27% in 2005. By contrast, Denmark had nearly 10% of unemployment rate, which was also the lowest among the five countries. The percentage of the other three countries was almost the same (about 16%). It is clearly seen that in all five countries the unemployment rate among young people was higher than the overall unemployment rate. And in both categories, Poland had the highest rate, while Denmark had the lowest rate.
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, Poland had the highest figure in the five
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(more than 35%), followed by Italy (30%). In Hungary and Germany, 25% and 20% of
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young
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had no jobs. This figure was the lowest in Denmark, at 15%.

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was almost the same (about 16%).

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. And in both categories, Poland had the highest
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005 compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries

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