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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates about the percentage of the global population and distribution of wealth to 8 different regions. Overall, the highest share of wealth is for North America, the least is a tie between both Africa and India, whereas in the case of the population share, China is leading among all the other region and Rich-Asia pacific with the lesser amount of population percentage. The region of North America has about 34% of the world population share and, Europe and Rich-Asia pacific has about 30% and 24% respectively. The Latin America and Caribbean as well as the other pacific has no more than 5%, while Africa and India approximately had the least of 1% of the global share in population. In the case of wealth share, China has about 23% amongst all the remaining region, whereas, the other regions have lesser than that of 17% and also has a steady decrease, Though Rich-Asia pacific has the least number of percentage of 5%.
The bar chart illustrates about the percentage of the global
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and distribution of wealth to 8
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different
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, the highest
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of wealth is for North America, the least is a tie between both Africa and India, whereas in the case of the
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population
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, China is leading among all the other
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and Rich-Asia pacific with the lesser amount of
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population
percentage.

The
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of North America has about 34% of the world
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and, Europe and Rich-Asia pacific has about 30% and 24%
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. The Latin America and Caribbean
as well
as the other pacific has no more than 5%, while Africa and India approximately had the least of 1% of the global
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in population.

In the case of wealth
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, China has about 23%
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amongst
all the remaining
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, whereas, the other
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have lesser than that of 17% and
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has a steady decrease, Though Rich-Asia pacific has the least number of percentage of 5%.
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