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The chart below gives information about animals, by taxonomic group, at risk in South Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about animals, by taxonomic group, at risk in South Australia. yxJjM
This column chart gives the information about several taxonomic animal species in South Astraulia. A glance at the chart discloses that between all of the species, presumed extinct mammals is the highest, amounting to fifty six at risk. Vulnerable animals are high in nearly every species, namely mammals, birds, and freshwater. While not only the amount of presumed extinct animals is high in mammals, the other listed groups are also fairly high. By contrast, these groups are relatively low in invertebrates and amphibians: the amphibians only have eight of the vulnerable animals while invertabrates own five critically endangered with six endangered animals. Endangered animals is remarkably high in both birds and reptiles, dominating thirty and nineteen respectively, however, they are similar between the minority amount of presumed extinct groups of animals. Although marine fishes only own fifteen of the vulnerable group animals, its content is higher than invertebrates and amphibians, both of which have vulnerable animals lower than ten.
This column chart gives the information about several taxonomic
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species in South
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. A glance at the chart discloses that between
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species, presumed extinct mammals is the highest, amounting to
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the amount of presumed extinct
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in mammals, the other listed
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low in invertebrates and amphibians: the amphibians
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invertabrates
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in both birds and reptiles, dominating thirty and nineteen
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fifteen of the
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about animals, by taxonomic group, at risk in South Australia.

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