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The chart below give information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The number of social networking sites people who was used in a particular nation is depicted by bar graph in during time period. At a fleeting glance, 36 percent of inhabitants used one site in 2014, whereas less than 8 percent of person's used one site in 2015. Moreover, almost similar percentile of humans used two sites in both years. In 2014, 12 percent of multitudes was used three sites, whilst 18% in second year. Moving further, a tiny proportion of masses used five sites in 2014, apart from this, it was doubled fold in next year. The percentage of people who used four sites in first year and second year was 5% and 6%, respectively.
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IELTS academic The chart below give information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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