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The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal and this analysis is done between 1967 and 2007. Overall, there were fluctuations in each line graph that depicts the mean carbon dioxide emissions per person in different countries, additionally, there is no steady increase or decrease. However, in 1977 the emissions were maximum in Sweden. In 1977, there was a constant increase in the carbon dioxide emitted, while in Sweden first there was a increase in emissions which was approximately 10 metric tonnes and after that emissions drifted down to 7. On the other hand, in the same year there was a steady increase in carbon dioxide emissions that was around 6 and after it showed a slight taper off which was approximately 7, additionally, for United Kingdom it showed slight increase which was rounded off to 11 and after that there was a small decrease.

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 between 1967 and 2007.

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On the other hand
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