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The reported table illustrates the numbers of different fast food dishes consumed in Melbourne in the year 2005 and in the present.

The reported table illustrates the numbers of different fast food dishes consumed in Melbourne in the year 2005 and in the present. In addition, it shows the projected numbers for the year 2025. In the graph we can see a general growing trend with the amount of served dishes that from 92 in 2005 grows to 105 in the present year and more than 150 in the projection of 2025. In particular, we see that the two most popular dishes remain the same during the 20 years period. Hamburger and Fried Chicken occupy more than the 75% of the total dishes in the period from 2005 to the present, and two thirds in 2025. This relative decrease is due to the impressive growth of salads sales in the considered period. Salad dishes numbers soared from a low 5 in 2005 to a 41 in 2025, with only a 10 units gap from the popular Hamburger. In turn, Fried Rice and Noodles experienced a slight growth of 3 and 2 units each in the considered period.
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consumed in Melbourne in the
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2005 and in the present.
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the projected numbers for the
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2025.

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a general growing trend with the amount of served

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that from 92 in 2005 grows to 105 in the present
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and more than 150 in the projection of 2025.

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that the two most popular
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remain the same during the 20 years
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. Hamburger and Fried Chicken occupy more than the 75% of the total
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in the
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from 2005 to the present, and two thirds in 2025. This relative decrease is due to the impressive growth of salads sales in the considered
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. Salad
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numbers soared from a low 5 in 2005 to a 41 in 2025, with
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a 10 units gap from the popular Hamburger.

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.
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IELTS academic The reported table illustrates the numbers of different fast food dishes consumed in Melbourne in the year 2005 and in the present.

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