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the chart bellow gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

the chart bellow gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. m1Abn
The bar graph Illustrates data about the most popular sports between (cricket, athletics, marital arts, basketball, tennis, netball, soccer, swimming) among boys and girls in New Zealand in 2002. Units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that boys prefer playing sports more than girls in the given period. Among girls, the most popular sport was netball, while the least common sport was cricket. On the other hand, soccer was the most popular sport among boys, whereas netball was the least common sport. In terms of the most popular sports among boys and girls, netball is the most popular sport among girls at about 26%, while for boys it was the least common sport at about 2%. Furthermore, soccer was the most common sport among boys at 25%; conversely, it is less common among girls at about 14%. On the other hand, cricket is the least popular sport for girls at about 1%, even so for boys it is more popular at about 11%. Furthermore, athletics, marital arts, tennis and basketball had an average 4% for girls and 8% for boys.
The bar graph Illustrates data about the most
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