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The chart and table show the time (minutes) between men and women spent on various household and leisure activities every day in 2008 in UK.

The chart and table show the time (minutes) between men and women spent on various household and leisure activities every day in 2008 in UK. WEndW
The bar chart and table illustrate the time (minutes) between males and females spent on different types of household and leisure activities every day in 2008 in the United Kingdom. There was the biggest difference between the time used on shopping by males (5 minutes) and females (50 minutes), while the time taken on watching TV & Video by men was similar to that by women, when they were both about 115 minutes. The time consumed on washing up by women was four times as much as that by men, at 40 minutes, while the opposite situation can be found in terms of fixing and repairing. Besides, the time costed on sports and exercise by men was nearly three times of that by women, which was 45 minutes approximately. Compared with men, women spent more time on cooking and washing, with 60 minutes. In summary, it took women more time on shopping, cooking, washing and washing up, while men spent more time on sport, exercise, fixing and repairing.
The bar chart and table illustrate the
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types of household and leisure activities every day in 2008 in the United Kingdom.

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on shopping by males (5 minutes) and females (50 minutes), while the
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taken on watching TV & Video by
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, when they were both about 115 minutes.

The
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consumed on washing up by
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was four
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, at 40 minutes, while the opposite situation can
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costed on sports and exercise by
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, which was 45 minutes approximately. Compared with
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,
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spent more
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on cooking and washing, with 60 minutes.

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more
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on shopping, cooking, washing and washing up, while
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spent more
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on sport, exercise, fixing and repairing.
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