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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The bar chart gives information about the amount of four types of different waste (paper, glass, tins, garden) collected by a recycling center between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in tons. Overall, paper waste held the largest tons collected among four distinctive categories throughout five years, except in 2013. Garden litter had the smallest gathered amount compared with three remaining types of waste - paper, glass, and garden from 2011 to 2015. Generally, in terms of paper waste, the collection of this type was the highest among four categories (57 tons in 2011, 50 tons in 2012, 51 tons in 2014 and 70 tons in 2015, respectively). In 2015, paper waste had the largest mass collected, with 70 tons. Exceptionally in 2013, glass had the largest tons collected exactly 48 tons. In contrast, the amount of collected garden litter had been the smallest throughout a five-year period, with 32 tons in 2011, 15 tons in 2012, 31 in 2014, and 35 in 2015. The mass of garden waste held the smallest in 2013, with 31 tons, respectively.
The bar chart gives information about the amount of four types of
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collected by a recycling center between 2011 and 2015. Units
are measured
in tons.

Overall
, paper
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waste
held the largest tons collected among four distinctive categories throughout five years, except in 2013.
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Garden
litter had the smallest gathered amount compared with three remaining types of
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waste
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paper, glass, and
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garden
from 2011 to 2015.

Generally
, in terms of paper
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waste
, the collection of this type was the highest among four categories (57 tons in 2011, 50 tons in 2012, 51 tons in 2014 and 70 tons in 2015,
respectively
). In 2015, paper
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waste
had the largest mass collected, with 70 tons.
Exceptionally
in 2013, glass had the largest tons collected exactly 48 tons.

In contrast
, the amount of collected
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garden
litter had been the smallest throughout a five-year period, with 32 tons in 2011, 15 tons in 2012, 31 in 2014, and 35 in 2015. The mass of
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garden
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held the smallest in 2013, with 31 tons,
respectively
.
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