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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. 3qR5
The bar chart depicts the trend of population in Japan from the past and the predicted population in the future. Whilst, the table illustrates the population in number and the perecentage of people aged 65 years old an above from year 1950 up to the future year 2055. Overall, it is clearly seen that there is an increased number in the population of Japan from the past up to the future. In year 1950, Japan has a total of 84. 1 million people and it increased by 10 million every 10 years with a population of 104. 5 million in 1970. Moreover, in 1975 the population gradually rose until it reaches its highest number in 2005 accounting to 127. 8 million people. From 2010 to 2015 there were a slight decreased in the population, also it is predicted that it will continue to dropped in 2055 with a population of 89. 9 million. Population in the elderly people was accounted to 4. 1 million in 1950 which is 4. 9% of the total population. It dramatically rose to 20% or 25. 7 million people in year 2005 and it will continuously increased up to 36. 5 million or 41% of the total population. In conclusion, the total population of Japan, most especially the elderly people aged 65 years old and above has rose over time and will continue to increase in the future.
The bar chart depicts the trend of
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in the future. Whilst, the table illustrates the
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in number and the
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people
aged 65 years
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year
1950 up to the future
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2055.

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that there is an increased number in the
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population
of
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Japan
from the past up to the future.

In
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year
1950,
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Japan
has a
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total
of 84. 1
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million
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people
and it increased by 10
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million
every 10 years with a
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population
of 104. 5
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million
in 1970.
Moreover
, in 1975 the
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population
gradually
rose until it reaches its highest number in 2005 accounting to 127. 8
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million
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people
. From 2010 to 2015 there were a slight decreased in the
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,
also
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is predicted
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of 89. 9 million.

Population in the elderly
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was accounted
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million
in 1950 which is 4. 9% of the
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total
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population
. It
dramatically
rose to 20% or 25. 7
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million
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people
in
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year
2005 and it will
continuously
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increased
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million
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total
population.

In conclusion
, the
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total
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population
of
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Japan
, most
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the elderly
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aged 65 years
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and above has
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rose
over time and will continue to increase in the future.
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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