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the change by the town of lakeside.

the change by the town of lakeside. GJgrL

The given maps illustrate the information about the urbanization of Lakeside between 2000 and 2009. In general, the area of woodland was deducted to make way for the industrial complex while there were lots of new facilities were built in the north of the river. In the north of the river, the derelict warehouses were made way for the car park which was opposite the offices. There used to be an old town to the north of the schools, but it was replaced by the construction of the new offices also the university which was in the southwest of the woodland in 2009. The multi-screen cinema was built at the same location as the arts center in 2000, the residential area was demolished and replaced by the erection of the shopping center. In the east of the river, there was a residential area before it was knocked down in 2009, furthermore, the area of the industrial complex was enlarged, which leads to the abundance of woodland trees was chopped down in 2009, and the area of the lake was diminished.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps illustrate the information about the urbanization of Lakeside between 2000 and 2009. In general
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of woodland was deducted
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for the industrial complex while there were lots of new facilities were built
 in the north of the river.

In the north of the river, the derelict warehouses were made
 way for the car park which was opposite the offices. There This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 town to the north of the schools, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was replaced
 by the construction of the new offices also
 the university which was in the southwest of the woodland in 2009. The multi-screen cinema was built
 at the same location as the arts center in 2000, the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was demolished
 and replaced by the erection of the shopping center.

In the east of the river, there was a residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it was knocked
 down in 2009, furthermore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the industrial complex was enlarged
, which leads to the abundance of woodland trees was chopped
 down in 2009, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the lake was diminished
. 