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The diagram below shows the prod diagram below shows the process of milk production.

The diagram below shows the prod diagram below shows the process of milk production. 1oDo7
The given diagram illustrates the process of milk manufacture and it contains several steps. As is shown by the diagram, the first step is grazing of cows. The next step is machine which carry cow milk comes twice a day, thenafter, the container of milk put into the refrigerator for particular hours in storage area of cold. Afterwards, the milk tanker pick up the delivery on daily basis. In addition to this, the following next step is is tanker of milk when to specific dairy. Later on daily does various production from milk such as cheese, cream and butter. And the milk is pasteurized and package in dairy with various size of packets. The last step seen is supermarkets and in different shops. Overall, the procedure carried out seven steps from the grazing of cow till the being sold in markets and shop.
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diagram illustrates the process of
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milk
manufacture and it contains several steps.

As
is shown
by the diagram, the
first
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step
is grazing of cows. The
next
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step
is machine which carry cow
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milk
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comes
twice a day,
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, the container of
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milk
put into the refrigerator for particular hours in storage area of
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cold
. Afterwards, the
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milk
tanker pick up the delivery on daily basis.

In addition
to this, the following
next
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step
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is is
tanker of
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milk
when to specific dairy. Later on daily does various production from
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milk
such as cheese, cream and butter. And the
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milk
is pasteurized
and package in dairy with various size of packets. The last
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step
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seen
is supermarkets and in
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different
shops.
Overall
, the procedure carried out seven
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steps
from the grazing of cow till the
being sold
in markets and shop.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the prod diagram below shows the process of milk production.

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143 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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