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The bar chart compares the old population of the UK in the year 1985 and also gives a guess for the year 2035.

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The bar chart compares the old population of the UK in the year 1985 and also gives a guess for the year 2035. Overall, the proportion are predicted to climb significantly in all the UK countries. In 1985, the percentage of population aged in Wales was 16 percent, making it the highest fugure followed by England and the UK with 15 percent. Scotland ranked third with 14 percent. While, Northern Ireland reached the bottom of 12 percent. By 2035, Wales is predicted to increase significantly, with figures is 26 percent. Similarly, this figure for Northern Ireland will almost increase to 23 percent. The figures for the proportion of population age in UK and England will also saw a slight increase to 15 percent in the remainder of the period. While, Scotland is also expected to increase significantly from 14 percent to 25 percent.
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population of the UK in the year 1985 and
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in all the UK countries. In 1985, the percentage of population aged in Wales was 16
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followed by England and the UK with 15
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. Scotland ranked third with 14
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in the remainder of the period.
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, Scotland is
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares the old population of the UK in the year 1985 and also gives a guess for the year 2035.

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