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Describe a time when you had to make a difficult desicion.

Describe a time when you had to make a difficult desicion. BLp9V

A few years ago there was a problem in my life. I still remember my friend Diyar being very stressed because his parents were getting divorced. He asked me for advice and I suggested my tentative suggestion. I advised him to reconcile his parents and then he tried to reconcile his parents. He achieved this. It was not long term solution although it was difficult to solve. The deciding factor was in my friend desicion and opinion. But he implemented unusual plan and in both sides were got benefit from this. After this situation I believed I can reach the clear desicion in every situation.

A few years ago there was a problem in my life. I still
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Diyar
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very
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stressed
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because
 his parents were getting divorced. He asked me for advice and I suggested my tentative suggestion. I advised him to reconcile his Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).parents, and
parents and
 then he tried to reconcile his parents. He achieved this. It was not long term solution although it was difficult to solve. The deciding factor was in my friend Possible spelling mistake found.decisiondepictionderision
desicion
 and opinion. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 he implemented unusual plan and in both sides were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 benefit from this. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 this situation I believed I can reach the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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desicion
 in every situation. 