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Describe a time when you had to make a difficult desicion.

Describe a time when you had to make a difficult desicion. BLp9V
A few years ago there was a problem in my life. I still remember my friend Diyar being very stressed because his parents were getting divorced. He asked me for advice and I suggested my tentative suggestion. I advised him to reconcile his parents and then he tried to reconcile his parents. He achieved this. It was not long term solution although it was difficult to solve. The deciding factor was in my friend desicion and opinion. But he implemented unusual plan and in both sides were got benefit from this. After this situation I believed I can reach the clear desicion in every situation.
A few years ago there was a problem in my life. I
still
remember my friend
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Diyar
being
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very
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stressed
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because
his parents were getting divorced. He asked me for advice and I suggested my tentative suggestion. I advised him to reconcile his
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parents and
then he tried to reconcile his parents. He achieved this. It was not long term solution although it was difficult to solve. The deciding factor was in my friend
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desicion
and opinion.
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But
he implemented unusual plan and in both sides were
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got
benefit from this.
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After
this situation I believed I can reach the
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clear
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desicion
in every situation.
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IELTS academic Describe a time when you had to make a difficult desicion.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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