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The bar chart below gives information about the volume of male and females taking part in a number of evening programs at an adult education center in the year 2009. The pie chart illustrates the ages of these class participants.

The bar chart below gives information about the volume of male and females taking part in a number of evening programs at an adult education center in the year 2009. The pie chart illustrates the ages of these class participants. Overall, it is clear from the bar chart that the bar chart quantity female adults loved studying more than male adults. In addition, one striking feature of the pie chart is that the oldest group was the biggest. In the three volumes such as drama, painting and language, the quantity of female adults was higher than the quantity male adults. To be specific, with 20%, the number of women was twice as high as that of male in the drama. In the painting, the volume of females was slightly higher than males, with 30% and 25% respectively. In the language, with 40%, the quantity of females was also twice as the quantity of male. However, in sculpture, the volume of male men was 5% higher than females women. According to the pie chart, the oldest group was the largest with 42%. Conversely, the smallest group was the ages under twenty group, which was 5%. Moreover, the forty to forty nine group is a quarter of the pie chart, which was 26%. Additionally, the twenty to twenty nine group and the thirty to thirty nine group occupied 11% and 16%.

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