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THE BELOW MAP SHOW THE CHANAGES THAT TOOK PLACE OVER THE PERIOD IN WEST PARK SCHOOL. SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AMD REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURE, AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT.

THE BELOW MAP SHOW THE CHANAGES THAT TOOK PLACE OVER THE PERIOD IN WEST PARK SCHOOL. gWMOa
THE PROVIDED MAPS ILLUSTATES THE CHNAGES EXPERIENCED BY WEST PARK SCHOOL FROM 1950 TO 2010. OVERALL, THE WEST PARK SCHOOL FACED SIGNIFICNAT CHANGES IN GIVEN TIME PERIOD, THE CAR PARK SHOWS DRASCTIC INREMENT IN FINAL YEAR. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN 1950, THE HOUSES IN WEST SIDE OF MAPS IS DECONSTRUCTED IN NEXT THREE DECADES WHILE, THE SCHOOL BUILDING AND PLAYGROUND REMAINS SIMILAR. FARMLAND IN FIRST YEAR IS RENAMED AS SPORTS FIELD IN 1980. IN CONTRAST, THE CAR PARK IS CONSTRUCTED IN WEST SIDE OF MAP AND SCIENCE BLOCK IS INTRODUCED NEAR SCHOOL BUILDING IN SECOND SPAN. THE MAPS FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE SIZE OF CAR PARK ELEVATED DRASCTICALLY FROM 1980 TO 2010 HOWEVER, THE AREA OF SOPRT FIELDS DIMINISHED IN SAME PERIOD. FINALLY, THE AREA FOR PLAYGROUND DECREASED IN 2010 AS COMPARED TO SIZE IN 1980.
THE PROVIDED
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MAPS
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ILLUSTATES
THE
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CHNAGES
EXPERIENCED BY WEST
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PARK
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SCHOOL
FROM 1950 TO 2010.

OVERALL
, THE WEST
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PARK
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SCHOOL
FACED
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SIGNIFICNAT
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CHANGES
IN
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GIVEN
TIME PERIOD, THE CAR
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PARK
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SHOWS
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DRASCTIC
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INREMENT
IN FINAL YEAR.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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THAT, IN 1950, THE
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HOUSES
IN WEST SIDE OF
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MAPS
IS DECONSTRUCTED
IN
NEXT
THREE DECADES WHILE, THE
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SCHOOL
BUILDING AND PLAYGROUND REMAINS SIMILAR. FARMLAND IN
FIRST
YEAR
IS RENAMED
AS SPORTS FIELD IN 1980.
IN CONTRAST
, THE CAR
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PARK
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN WEST SIDE OF
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MAP
AND SCIENCE BLOCK
IS INTRODUCED
NEAR
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SCHOOL
BUILDING IN SECOND SPAN.

THE
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MAPS
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE SIZE OF CAR
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PARK
ELEVATED
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DRASCTICALLY
FROM 1980 TO 2010
HOWEVER
, THE AREA OF
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SOPRT
FIELDS DIMINISHED IN SAME PERIOD.
FINALLY
, THE AREA FOR PLAYGROUND DECREASED IN 2010 AS COMPARED TO SIZE IN 1980.
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IELTS academic THE BELOW MAP SHOW THE CHANAGES THAT TOOK PLACE OVER THE PERIOD IN WEST PARK SCHOOL.

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