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The bar graph shows the some land's export for three factors during 2005,2015 and 2025.

The bar graph shows the some land's export for three factors during 2005, 2015 and 2025. Ep8m3
The given bar graph illustrates the performance of some land's primary experts in 2005 and 2015. It also indicates future projections for 2025. The data has been celebrated in USA billon. It has been observed from the graph, the Highest export will be noticed from the international tourism 2025 that will be 8 billion dollars. While, the sales of international tourism also showed a lowest amount in the year of 2005 which was recorded as 6 billion dollars. It is estimated that international tourism will continue to grow, by 2015 it was earning 7 billion dollars. In the case of meat and dairy products, it is likely that the sales of meat products will be decreased in the future as it was started from 4 billion dollars and now stand at 3. 5 billion dollars. Whereas, the dairy products sales were stood at 5 billion dollars during 2005 and after that there has been dramatic increase and the amount of sales was 8 billion dollars. It is predicted that exports in this area will fall slightly, for 2025, the figure of 7. 5 billion dollars is expected. In overall, the sales amount of international tourism will on peak and it will become the dominant industry.
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land's primary experts in 2005 and 2015. It
also
indicates future projections for 2025. The data has
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. It has
been observed
from the graph, the Highest export will
be noticed
from the
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international
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tourism
2025 that will be 8
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billion
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dollars
. While, the
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sales
of
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international
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tourism
also
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showed
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a
lowest amount in the year of 2005 which
was recorded
as 6
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billion
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dollars
. It
is estimated
that
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international
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tourism
will continue to grow, by 2015 it was earning 7
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billion
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dollars
. In the case of meat and dairy products, it is likely that the
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sales
of meat products will
be decreased
in the future as it was
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started
from 4
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billion
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dollars
and
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now
stand at 3. 5
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billion
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dollars
. Whereas, the dairy products
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sales
were stood
at 5
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billion
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dollars
during 2005 and after that there has been dramatic increase and the amount of
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sales
was 8
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billion
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dollars
. It
is predicted
that exports in this area will fall
slightly
, for 2025, the figure of 7. 5
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billion
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is
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. In
overall
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sales
amount of
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international
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tourism
will on peak and it will become the dominant industry.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the some land's export for three factors during 2005, 2015 and 2025.

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