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The pie chart show the percentage of house renting and house owned in the Uk in 1991 to 2007.

The pie chart show the percentage of house renting and house owned in the Uk in 1991 to 2007. E7x0R
The pie charts represent the changes with the proportion of housing ownership and renting between 1991 to 2002 In 1991, home ownership were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, followed by social renting which amounting of nearly 23% of total houses and the remaining portion was directed to private rent (about 11%) and social housing (of about 6%). In contrast, by 2007, the proportion of home ownership rose substantially to 70%, which represent 10% of growing rates. However, the rest of housing types decreased; social renting of 17% and social housing of 2%. Meanwhile, privately rented homes had remained unchange. Overall, It is interesting to note that, the proportion of home ownership increased substantially while social renting and social housing reduced in its portion except for private renting
The pie charts represent the
changes
with the proportion of housing
ownership
and
renting
between 1991 to 2002


In 1991, home
ownership
were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, followed by
social
renting
which amounting of
nearly
23% of total
houses
and the remaining portion
was directed
to private rent (about 11%) and
social
housing (of about 6%).

In contrast
, by 2007, the proportion of home
ownership
rose
substantially
to 70%, which represent 10% of growing rates.
However
, the rest of housing types decreased;
social
renting
of 17% and
social
housing of 2%. Meanwhile,
privately
rented
homes
had remained
unchange
.

Overall
, It is interesting to note that, the proportion of home
ownership
increased
substantially
while
social
renting
and
social
housing
reduced
in its portion
except for
private
renting
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IELTS academic The pie chart show the percentage of house renting and house owned in the Uk in 1991 to 2007.

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