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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people who owned and rented household accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people who owned and rented household accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It can be realized that there is an upward trend in people’s preference to owning a household estate for majority of the time period. On similar background, a gradual downfall has been observed where people rent an accommodation for stay. However, these facts does not hold true for the last decade. In 1971, people equally prefers renting or owning a household constituting to nearly 50%. There were 69% rented accommodation in 1939 and 1953 which changed to owned accommodation in 1991 and 2001. Similarly, there were 32% owned accommodation in 1939 and 1953 which changed to rented accommodation in 1991 and 2001. This suggests that there is an acceleration in the rate of owned houses, which remained constant for 1991 and 2001; before facing a downfall in 2011 to 67%. On similar background, there is a downward trend in the rate of rented properties, which remained constant for 1991 and 2001; before having a rise in 2011 to 37%.
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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people’s
preference to owning a household estate for
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majority of
the time period. On similar background, a gradual downfall has
been observed
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rent an
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accommodation
for stay.
However
, these facts does not hold true for the last decade.

In 1971,
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prefers renting or owning a household constituting to
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50%. There were 69% rented
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accommodation
in 1939 and 1953 which
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owned
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accommodation
in 1991 and 2001.
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, there were 32%
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owned
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accommodation
in 1939 and 1953 which
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changed
to rented
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accommodation
in 1991 and 2001.

This suggests that there is an acceleration in the rate of
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owned
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houses
, which remained constant for 1991 and 2001;
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facing a downfall in 2011 to 67%. On similar background, there is a downward trend in the rate of rented properties, which remained constant for 1991 and 2001;
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having a rise in 2011 to 37%.
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the percentage of people who owned and rented household accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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