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The bar graph illustrates the percentage contributions made by Agriculture, Industry, and Service sectors to India's GDP between 1960-2000.

The bar graph illustrates the percentage contributions made by Agriculture, Industry, and Service sectors to India's GDP between 1960-2000. PRaYg
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of three different sectors (agriculture, industry, services) that contributed to India's GDP from 1990 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that the industry and services showed upward trends throughout the period while agriculture displayed an opposite trend. In terms of agriculture, this was the most contribution among all, accounting for over 60 in 1960, after which, this figure declined steadily to less than a fifth in 2000. The services, on the other hand, rocketed dramatically from 16% in 1960 to around 62% in 2000. In contrast, the industry sector provided the least to the percentage of India's GDP in 1960, peaking at 15%, at which point, this category witnessed a gradual increase to 25% in 1980. However, the percentage of the total contribution of the industry remained unchanged over 20 years
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of three
different
sectors (agriculture,
industry
, services) that contributed to India's GDP from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, it is
clear
that the
industry
and services
showed
upward trends throughout the period while agriculture displayed an opposite trend.

In terms of agriculture, this was the most contribution among all, accounting for over 60 in 1960, after which, this figure declined
steadily
to less than a fifth in 2000. The services,
on the other hand
, rocketed
dramatically
from 16% in 1960 to around 62% in 2000.

In contrast
, the
industry
sector provided the least to the percentage of India's GDP in 1960, peaking at 15%, at which point, this category witnessed a gradual increase to 25% in 1980.
However
, the percentage of the total contribution of the
industry
remained unchanged over 20 years
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IELTS academic The bar graph illustrates the percentage contributions made by Agriculture, Industry, and Service sectors to India's GDP between 1960-2000.

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