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My favourite teacher in high school

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My favourite teacher Nora. She is teach math subject. She made me good in math, and made me love math. She is a super teacher she can explain math very clear. She is successful in it job. She had six year to teach math. I like this teacher because she is made my good in calculate, and made me calculate in short time. She teach how to solve the question in the right steps. She has a good behaviour, and sometimes made me laughing. She has good communication skills, and can describe math simply shaAlso, all the students love him, and they They appreciate her efforts. At the end, I want to say I hope she have a good life because she made better in math.
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teacher Nora. She is
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teach
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math
subject. She made me
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good
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, and made me
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She
is a super teacher she can
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math
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very
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clear
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is successful in it job.
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had six year to teach
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. I like this teacher
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because
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my
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in calculate, and made me calculate in short time. She
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how to solve the question in the right steps. She has a
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good
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, and
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made me laughing.
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has
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good
communication
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, and can
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describe
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math
simply
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, all the students
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him, and
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appreciate her efforts. At the
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, I want to say I hope she
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life
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IELTS academic My favourite teacher in high school

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1 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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