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The bar graph illustrates the average hours that has been spent by individuals

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The bar graph illustrates the average hours that has been spent by individuals on unpaid work such as babysitting, household chores and farming per week, divided on different categories. Overall, It is evident that the married womens in all three categories spends the plethora amount of average hours in free jobs. In contrast of that, marrired man seems to be least responsible towareds the same. In detail, A steady growth in spents hours of household activies can be seen in all categories of married women. The women having no kids spends nearly about 30 hours on average, which is the least. With respect to the women with 1 or 2 juvelins, leverages 50 hours per week. Married men in both the categories, which are without childern and with 1 or 2 childern, expenses same number of average hours on unpaid household stuffs which is around 19 hours. Furthermore, it can be visualized that, the hights hours that has been spent is by married women having more that 3 childern, which is 60 hours. Men in same category spends the least, which is around 17 hours.
The bar graph illustrates the
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different
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, It is evident that the married
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womens
in all three
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categories
spends the plethora amount of
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in free jobs. In
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contrast
of that,
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marrired
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seems to be least responsible
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towareds
the same.

In detail, A steady growth in
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spents
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of household
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activies
can be
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seen
in all
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of married
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women
. The
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having no kids spends
nearly
about 30
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on
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, which is the least. With respect to the
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with 1 or 2
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juvelins
, leverages 50
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per week. Married
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men
in both the
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, which are without
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childern
and with 1 or 2
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childern
, expenses same number of
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on unpaid household stuffs which is around 19 hours.

Furthermore
, it can
be visualized
that, the
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hights
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is by married
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having more that 3
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childern
, which is 60
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.
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spends the least, which is around 17
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