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Compare expenses in American people in 1996 and 1966.

Compare expenses in American people in 1996 and 1966. ndJVe

The pie chart compare to the expenditure of US people in two varriuos catagories which are food, cars, petrol reastaurant, furniture, computer, book. Overall, it is clear that the highest amount went spending on cars in 1996 and food in 1966. Moreover, computer and books were spending the lowest amount by citizens in both years. In detail, The American people spending 45% amount on cars in 1996 burly this spending ratio reached 23% in 1966. In 1966, spending on restaurants more amount than 1996, respectively 7 percent and 14%. The proportion of spending of food fell 44% in 1966 to 14% in 1996. On computer expenses was on 1% in 1966 but in 1996, remarkable 10 percent increase of spending on computer by the American people. Furthermore, the us people spending 9% amount on petrol owing to the fact that not large amount of petrol expenses compared to the 1996.

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