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The pie chart compares the percentages of five different aged people who visit the local cinema.

The pie chart compares the percentages of five different aged people who visit the local cinema. kY9XM

Looking at the pie chart it is clear that the 35-54 aged visitors are the most popular, while people who almost do not watch are kids and teenagers. Looking at the details we can mentioned that 51% of people who go to the local cinema are adult and old generation because for them it is more fascinating to spare time like this. However, due to some changes in society children and teens who are turned between 5-14 do not prefer to have lazy time. With respect to other blocks of pie chart, we can understand that people who are 55 and 15 to 24 are in the second position in statistics by getting 16% equally. Nevertheless, we have also one point that is 25-34 aged people who get 12% that is 4% lower than other two categories.

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