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The bar graph depicts the percentage change in average house prices in five different countries in 1990-2002compared with 1989

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The bar graph depicts the percentage change in average house prices in five different countries in 1990-2002compared with 1989 To begin with, in 1990-1995, average percentage of housing prices in New York was decreased by 5% than 1989. But, in Madrid and Frankfurt house prices increased slightly near about 3%and the maximum percentage of house prices declined in Toyko and London that was same above 5%. Furthermore, in1996 to2002 compared with 1989, the average proportion stood at 5% and 4% in New York and Madrid, respectively and in Toyko, it decreased 5% from 1989. Moreover, the highest percentage was increased above 10% in London and only 2% was Rose in Frankfurtfrom 1989 yearOverall, the Toyko housing prices were decreased and in Madrid, housing prices were increased throughout the given period.
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IELTS academic The bar graph depicts the percentage change in average house prices in five different countries in 1990-2002compared with 1989

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