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The chart displays how changed the percentages of magazines sold for each person in five countries throughout 20 years starting 2000 to 202

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The chart displays how changed the percentages of magazines sold for each person in five countries throughout 20 years starting 2000 to 2020. Overall, it was observed the least numbers by country E while Country B had the hightest values. Other countries have changed every year. According to chart, in 2000, Country B have obtained the most percentage with 50% while Country E under the 10 %. Country A was just under 50% and other countries have lagged behind 40%. During after 10 years, it was occured a increase by country D and E, and that reached to respectivetely 20% and about 7 %. At the same time, it was happen a downward trend by other countries. Until 2020, Country A have declined by around 7% and that was 38%. Country B and Country C decreased slightly. (respectivately approximately 45% and 32%). It was seen a rise by Country D and that accessed to 22% while Country E dropped to where it began. Consequently, it have been an upward trend by Country D while other countries fell.
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E under the 10 %.
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