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The chart below shows the types of books read by different age groups in one country.

The chart below shows the types of books read by different age groups in one country. okLk3
The bar chart gives information about five types of books were read by different ages between 18 to 70 years old people in three groups. it can be clearly seen that romance books were the most popular type of books for 18-35 age group and biographies type of books were least popular type between all age groups. However, the five types of books witnessed fluctuation. Regarding, crime thrillers, the percentage of crime thrillers books that were read by the 18-35 age group was around 34 percent, in the 36-50 age group were about 64 percent and 51-70 age group were 51 percent. However, the percentage of history books in the 18-36 age group decreased slightly to 30 percent, in the 36-50 age group the percentage declined sharply to 35 percent and the percentage of history books in 51-70 age Groupe increased to 59 percent. In teams of, the percentage of biographies type of books between 18 and 35 years stood at 30 percent, in 36-50 age group were 35 percent and 51-70 age group about 38 percent. On the other hand, the percentage of romance books in 18-35 age group went up quickly and peaked the highest point which was around 71 percent, between 36 and 50 years old the percentage grew gradually to 53 percent and the percentage of this type of book in 51-70 age group rose slowly to 45 percent. However, the percentage of science fiction books that were read by 18-35age group dropped to around 61 percent, in 36-50 age group the percentage fell moderately to 58 percent and the percentage in 51-70 age group went down slightly to 41 percent.
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was around 34
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were about 64
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of history
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in the 18-36
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decreased
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between 18 and 35 years stood at 30
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were 35
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about 38
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went up
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dropped to around 61
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went down
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