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The bar graph below shows the amound of carbon emission in different countries during three different years.

The bar graph illustrates numbers of carbon gas released throughout the time period of 30 years in various nations. Overall, the United state shared the major proportion of co2 emission, while United kingdom and Canada were at least position in that list. In 1975, USA had released almost 12 lac metric tones of carbon gas, which was 3 fold more than rest of the countries. Followed by this, China and Germany were at the equal level with emossion of about 30, 0000 matric tones of co2. U. K, Canada and India had exteamly less amount of carbon emission, which was as an average 180 thousand tones. Moreover, in 1990, China and India experienced massive increase in numbers which is above 6 lac and 2 lac tones respectively. However, rest of the countries were almost at similar to previous level. In 2005, China rose dynamically in terms of co2 releasing proportion with about 1500, 000 tones and also USA had consistent growth in emission rate of carbon. Although India faced considerable increment, but rest of the nations were still maintaining an average rise in carbon emission
The bar graph illustrates numbers of
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gas released throughout the time period of 30 years in various nations.

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, the United state shared the major proportion of co2
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emission
, while
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United kingdom
and Canada were at least position in that list.

In 1975, USA had released almost 12 lac metric
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tones
of
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carbon
gas, which was
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3 fold
more than rest of the countries. Followed by this, China and Germany were at the equal level with
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emossion
of about 30, 0000
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matric
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tones
of co2. U. K, Canada and India had
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exteamly
less amount of
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carbon
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emission
, which was as an average 180 thousand tones.

Moreover
, in 1990, China and India experienced massive increase in numbers which is above 6 lac and 2 lac
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tones
respectively
.
However
, rest of the countries were almost at similar to previous level.

In 2005, China rose
dynamically
in terms of co2 releasing proportion with about 1500, 000
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tones
and
also
USA had consistent growth in
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emission
rate of
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carbon
. Although India faced considerable increment,
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rest of the nations were
still
maintaining an average rise in
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carbon
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emission
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