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The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar charts illustrate the proportion of male and female who are employed in Australia, Japan, and Ireland in 2005 and 2015. Overall, the amount of male workers dominated that of female in both years despite the increasing trend of workforce. In the year of 2005, the number of male workers un Japan were much higher in comparison to Australia's and Ireland's which is 75%. However, 30% of Japanese female workers were the lowest of the three given countries which is in contrast to male's. Staying in the third rank is the Australia's employment rate whose proportion for male and female workers were 62% and 38%. In 2015, saw no change in the ranking position of the Japanese male employees. In spite of having the lowest percentage in terms of employment rate in 2005, Australia's workers rose significantly compared to the Japanese and Ireland workers rates. Japan was followed by Ireland and Australia, these two countries were tied in second in 2015 with both with 70% male employment.
The following bar charts illustrate the proportion of male and
female
who
are employed
in Australia, Japan, and Ireland in 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, the amount of male
workers
dominated that of
female
in both years despite the increasing trend of workforce. In the year of 2005, the number of male
workers un
Japan were much higher
in comparison
to Australia's and Ireland's which is 75%.
However
, 30% of Japanese
female
workers
were the lowest of the three
given
countries which is
in contrast
to male's. Staying in the third rank is the Australia's employment rate whose proportion for male and
female
workers
were 62% and 38%. In 2015,
saw
no
change
in the ranking position of the Japanese male employees.
In spite of
having the lowest percentage in terms of employment rate in 2005, Australia's
workers
rose
significantly
compared to the Japanese and Ireland
workers
rates. Japan
was followed
by Ireland and Australia, these two countries
were tied
in second in 2015 with both with 70% male employment.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

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