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amount of Fairtrade sales

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The given table shows the amount of Fairtrade labelled sales of coffee, and bananas during 1999, and 2004 in five different European countries. A general view shows that UK has the highest sales of coffee in 2004, with a score of 20 millions euro which is much higher than that in 1999 with a score of 1. 5. On the other hand, the table illustrates that Switzerland scores the highest scores in banana trade for both 1999, and 2004 with a score of 15, and 40 in turn. The ratio of coffee sales increased in all countries between 1999, and 2004. UK witnessed the greatest increase increase among all other countries followed by Switzerland where the sales doubled in 2004 and reached 6 after they where 3, on the same trend, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden witnessed a slight increase. On the other hand, the proportion of banana sales increased in some countries, and decreased in others. Switzerland conducts the highest increase among all countries, then followed by UK, Belgium where the amounts noticeably plunged from 1 to 5. 5, and from 0. 6 to 4 respectively. However, these amounts decreased in Sweden from 1. 8 to 1 in 2004, and from 2 to 0. 8 in Denmark.

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 of 15, and 40 in turn.

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