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The bar chart shows the % of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the % of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. 8DGw

The bar graph illustrates the percentage of the total world population in India, China, USA and Japan in the year 1950, 2002 and projections for 2050. In general, china contributed the most in population while Japan has least significant proportion in the time period of 150 Years. The china has highest percentage in the beginning of the year that is nearly 25% then it slightly decrease and expected to reach 15% in the end of the year. It can also be seen that USA has experienced downward trend but it is expected to remain steady in future where as the rate of population in Japan has dropped below 5% in the ending period of the year. However, India has increased gradually just above 15% in 2002 and the graph also represents that in future the rate of population in India will reach nearly 20% in 2050.

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