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The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of people who visited different museums in London. gWpba
The given chart illustrates the number of guests who visited to four different museums in London. It is clear from the graph that the proportion of visitors in almost museum had a tendency to increased or remain stable in the first three months except the science museum, then it started to decrease for the rest of the time. Additionally, it is shown that the figure for peoples visited to British museum had receiving a several of visitors in almost months, while there were few people came to National museum. From June to July, the History museum and the British museum were stay unchanged at around 400, 000 guests. However, the National museum and the Science museum had a slight decrease, at least by 30, 000 guests in both museum. Notably in August, the History museum, British museum and National museum have a dramatical increased. There was over 700, 000 visitors came to British museum, over 300, 000 people visited to National museum and 600, 000 visitors came to History museum, more than it got in two months before 200, 000 people. Meanwhile, the number of guests who visited to Science museum were remain at 400, 000 from July. In the last three months, there were three museum had a tendency to decrease, it was British museum, History museum and National museum. From August to October, the number of guests came to three given museum have a dramatical decreased by roughly 200, 000 visitors, 200, 000 visitors and over 100, 000 visitors, respectively. By contrast, the proportion of visitors came to Science museum have grew to 500, 000 people in September and then, it dropped down to 300, 000 guests.
The
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given
chart illustrates the number of
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guests
who
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visited
to four
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different
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museums
in London.

It is
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clear
from the graph that the proportion of
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visitors
in almost
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museum
had a tendency to increased or remain stable in the
first
three
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months
except the
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science
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museum
, then it
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started
to decrease for the rest of the time.
Additionally
, it
is shown
that the figure for
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peoples
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visited
to British
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museum
had receiving a several of
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visitors
in almost
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months
, while there were few
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people
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came
to
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National
museum.

From June to July, the
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History
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museum
and the British
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museum
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were
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stay
unchanged at around 400, 000
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guests
.
However
, the
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National
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museum
and the
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Science
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museum
had a slight decrease, at least by 30, 000
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guests
in both
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museum
.
Notably
in August, the
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History
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museum
, British
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museum
and
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National
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museum
have a
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dramatical
increased. There was over 700, 000
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visitors
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came
to British
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museum
, over 300, 000
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people
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visited
to
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National
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museum
and 600, 000
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visitors
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came
to
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History
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museum
, more than it
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got
in two
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months
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before
200, 000
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people
. Meanwhile, the number of
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guests
who
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visited
to
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Science
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museum
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were
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remain
at 400, 000 from July.

In the last three
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months
, there were three
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museum
had a tendency to decrease, it
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was British
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museum
,
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History
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museum
and
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National
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museum
. From August to October, the number of
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guests
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came
to three
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given
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museum
have a
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dramatical
decreased by roughly 200, 000
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visitors
, 200, 000
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visitors
and over 100, 000
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visitors
,
respectively
. By contrast, the proportion of
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visitors
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came
to
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Science
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museum
have
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grew
to 500, 000
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people
in September and then, it
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dropped down
to 300, 000
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guests
.
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