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Homework should be given to students outside the classroom or not. State your opinion

Homework should be given to students outside the classroom or not. State your opinion alm6V
Giving homework for students has been argued for times. Some people agree but some follow the opposite. In my opinion, I personally think that students should not be given work after class. It it should be an option for them. Instead of staying in their room and doing what they are forced to do, staying outside to play sports or spending the time on experiencing new things is what they should head to after school. They have their rights to do what they love. Forcing is not a good idea It also affects health. Some students do not have enough time to do homework due to various types of reasons. Consequently, they choose to stay up late to finish it before the deadline despite the fact that it will cause headaches, weight loss, and many bad effects to their health In conclusion, due to the reasons I have mentioned above, students should not be given work after class
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should be an option for them.
Instead
of staying in their room and doing what they
are forced
to do, staying outside to play sports or spending the time on experiencing new things is what they should head to after school. They have their rights to do what they
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. Forcing is not a
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idea


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time to do homework due to various types of reasons.
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, they choose to stay up late to finish it
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IELTS academic Homework should be given to students outside the classroom or not. State your opinion

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6.0
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