Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The maps illustrate the transformation of a village called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent village into a tourist destination since 1995. Overall, it can be seen that more houses and a range of tourism faciliti

The maps illustrate the transformation of a village called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent village into a tourist destination since 1995. Overall, it can be seen that more houses and a range of tourism faciliti jVYVa
The maps illustrate the transformation of a village called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent village into a tourist destination since 1995. Overall, it can be seen that more houses and a range of tourism facilities including hotels, holiday homes, restaurants, and sports grounds have been erected to replace green spaces, fishing areas, and farmland. In terms of the southern part of the village, in order to host tourist activities, the dock of fishing boats and the local fish market have been replaced by new apartment blocks. In addition, a marina for luxury yachts has been built in the southeast of the village. While sports facilities have been demolished and made way for the construction of restaurants, the coffee house has been relocated to the east. Regarding the northern part of the village, the landscape has been urbanized with more houses constructed. To serve more travellers, accommodation facilities like hotels have been renovated and many holiday homes have been built on the area where a public park used to be. Additionally, while the open space near the public park has been transformed into a huge parking area, the farmland located in the northeast of the village has been converted into new a golf course and a tennis court.
The maps illustrate the transformation of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
into a tourist destination since 1995.
Overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
and a range of tourism facilities including hotels, holiday homes, restaurants, and sports grounds have
been erected
to replace green spaces, fishing areas, and farmland.

In terms of the southern part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
, in order to host tourist activities, the dock of fishing boats and the local fish market have
been replaced
by new apartment blocks.
In addition
, a marina for luxury yachts has
been built
in the southeast of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
. While sports facilities have
been demolished
and made way for the construction of restaurants, the coffee
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
has
been relocated
to the east.

Regarding the northern part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
, the landscape has
been urbanized
with more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
constructed. To serve more
Possible spelling mistake found.
travellers
, accommodation facilities like hotels have
been renovated
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
holiday homes have
been built
on the area where a public park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to be.
Additionally
, while the open space near the public park has
been transformed
into a huge parking area, the farmland located in the northeast of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
has
been converted
into new a golf course and a tennis court.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The maps illustrate the transformation of a village called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent village into a tourist destination since 1995. Overall, it can be seen that more houses and a range of tourism faciliti

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
206 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    Residential water use in Australia in 2004 and water consumed in Australia in 2004
    The given bar chart highlights the proportion of water, which was used by Australian people in residential area for different reasons in 2004, whereas the pie chart shows proportion of water was consumed by 6 establishmentsOverall, what stand out from the bar chart is that the proportion of water wa...
  • 6band
    The two graphs show the sales for Apple products in Hong Kong in 2010 and 2020.
    The two graphs show the sales for Apple Products in Hong Kong over the years from 2010 to 2020. It is surprising to note that I phone made up the longest percentage of sales in the last decade despite a noticeable drop in its percentage. The sales of iphone, the most popular product among all Apple...
  • 6.5band
    Homework should be given to students outside the classroom or not. State your opinion
    Giving homework for students has been argued for times. Some people agree but some follow the opposite. In my opinion, I personally think that students should not be given work after class. It it should be an option for them. Instead of staying in their room and doing what they are forced to do, st...
  • 6band
    The table below gives information about the international airport in six cities.
    The table illustrates the details regarding the international airport in six cities, including Bareclona, Chicago, Las Vegas, In Cheon< Frankfurt and Garhoud. It is surprising to note that the airport in Garhoud opened in 1960 is visited by the highest number of bisitors every year even though it ha...
  • 5.5band
    Another type of non-optical sensor
    Another type of non-optical sensor is based on detecting small changes in the mass of the sensor when exposed to chemical analytes through the physical adsorption of analytes on the sensor or specific chemical reactions of the analytes with the sensor. Mass sensors are usually microelectromechanical...
  • 5.5band
    Percentage Change in price of housing in five different cities
    The bar chart compares the average prices of housings in five different cities (New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and Landon) in 1990-1995 and in 1996-2002 with the average prices in 1989. Overall it can be seen a significant drop in most of the cities in the first period of time, the next time fra...





Get more results for topic:
  • The maps illustrate the transformation of a village called Warwick from an agriculture-dependent village into a tourist destination since 1995. Overall, it can be seen that more houses and a range of tourism faciliti