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The bar chart shows the information about the growth of urban tradition in certain parts of the world involved the prediction of the future.

The bar chart shows the information about the growth of urban tradition in certain parts of the world involved the prediction of the future. gYNYA
The bar chart illustrate information about the growth of urban citizen in certain parts of the world involved the prediction of the future that data is calibrated in the percentage. Overall, it is clear that, the maximum percentage had been increased of the Latin America in 20 30 and while the minimum proportion had been decreased in Africa. On the one hand, around 30% population had been decreased of the towns and cities in the whole world from 1950 but and the mm the percentage of citizens had been slightly increased in the whole world that was approximately 40% more over, the proportion had been remained stable of the citizen safe Africa and Asia from 1950 however in 2013 the inhabitants had been constant in jie's same country which was approximately 30%. On the flip side, the percentage had been gradually rules of the urban area in whole world that was approximately 60% Moreover, the proportion had been declined of the towns and Latin America from 1958 was nearly 40%.
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had
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of the Latin America in 20 30 and while the minimum proportion had
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of the towns and cities in the whole
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world
from 1950
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and the mm the
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of citizens had been
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that was approximately 40% more over, the proportion had
been remained
stable of the citizen safe Africa and Asia from 1950
however
in 2013 the inhabitants had been constant in
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's same country which was approximately 30%. On the flip side, the
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had been
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of the urban area in whole
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that was approximately 60%
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, the proportion had
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of the towns and Latin America from 1958 was
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the information about the growth of urban tradition in certain parts of the world involved the prediction of the future.

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